This week we went through a critique session with people outside of our school. We went through two rounds of critique. The first round we didn’t have anyone to critique our work since not all the visitors showed up, so during that round we just discussed what we were going to say and how to present it in a way that would encourage helpful critique on our products. The next round of critique we had a graphic designer named David Varela critique our work. Since he was a graphic designer we wanted him to focus his critique on our t-shirt design because my group mates and I knew that it needed work. The critique we got from him was very helpful and I think it gave us a little push in the right direction. He showed us things that we could add to our t-shirt design to give it more meaning like adding detail to the band-aids and positioning them in meaningful places on our brain like where it is related or linked to depression. Then he told us that we should manipulate the design of a band-aid to signify things that could help with depression and put them on the corresponding parts of the brain. Although the changes he said we should make were small I know they will make a big difference and help us get our message across in a better way than we tried before. After we finished critique we talked with him for a little while afterward and he told us about a form of critique that he is familiar with and how it really helps include others ideas into one. The first person draws out their sketch and then passes it to the next person and they add something to it or they change it a little so that it looks better and you continue passing it around. I
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AuthorMy name is Sofianna Sanchez and I'm a junior at High Tech High Chula Vista. I'm wrote these blog posts weekly to help me prepare for writing them daily during my month long internship. Archives
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